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Tuesday, June 29, 2010
Dinosaur Story
Once there was a half dinosaur and half bird.
He likes to eat popcorn and he also likes to drink hot chocolate.
This half dinosaur and half bird is my animal.
He likes to play with people. He also likes to play with kids.
Kia ora Harlem I enjoyed reading your post about the half dinosaur and half bird animal. It is well set out and easy to read. Did you know that there is a legend about a person who was half bird and half woman? She wanted to marry a guy called Hatupatu and he had to escape from her. Follow this link http://www.maori.org.nz/korero/default.asp?pid=sp62&parent=55 if you want to read the story.
Wow Harlem, you did a really good mind map to help you plan your story. It is in paragraphs. You also did all this in one writing session. Well done.
ReplyDeletegreat post! Harlem.-keighley
ReplyDeleteKia ora Harlem I enjoyed reading your post about the half dinosaur and half bird animal. It is well set out and easy to read. Did you know that there is a legend about a person who was half bird and half woman? She wanted to marry a guy called Hatupatu and he had to escape from her. Follow this link http://www.maori.org.nz/korero/default.asp?pid=sp62&parent=55 if you want to read the story.
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