Cats
By Courtney
Did you know that cats like to play on streets? They also play with toys and mice. They also play outside and at parks. They also play in houses.
Some cats live at the vets. Some cats live in houses. Some cats live on their own.
Some cats like to eat cat biscuits, meat and fish. Cats eat many kinds of food.
Some cats could be black, white, grey, brown and orange. Cats are all kinds of colours.
I like the way you planned your writing and put them in paragraphs. You also used commas. Good thinking
ReplyDeleteI liked that I wrote a report instead of a recount or narrative, next time I will try and make it more interesting.
ReplyDeleteBy Courtney
Hi Courtney, I liked reading your report about cats. It reminded me of the book called, "My Cat Likes to Hide in Boxes". Have you read that book?
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